Grammar exercise for Newsgathering 1.
a) She felt bad about missing the school board meeting, but her editor fired her regardless of her excuse.
b) We will join in prayer for the students who died in the shooting, and we will fly the flag at half-staff.
c) It is all right if you miss class for a job interview. You can make up the class tomorrow.
d) We will divide the workload among three students.
e) The St. Joseph Board of Commissioners is planning to submit a proposal for a bond issue to pay for road improvements, and the board is hoping the election committee will reach a consensus to put the issue on the ballot.
f) I know you are eager to get this job. Each of the applicants will have a chance to discuss his strengths and weaknesses with the personnel director.
g) Based on your writing skills, it looks as if you could be a good journalist.
h) Each of the students is going to receive a plaque with his or her diploma at graduation.
i) She was embarrassed that she had fewer than five answers correct on the quiz.
j) After the boss read the report, he gave it to Jim and me to rewrite. He said it is due back Monday.
Monday, September 29, 2008
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Newsgathering Assigment
This is a practice article written for my Newsgathering class. Please enjoy.
Lead/Focus: Right-handed people live nine years longer than left-handed people
Articles: According to a study in today's New England Journal of Medicine, right-handed people live an average of nine years longer than left-handed people. Professor Diane Halpern of California State University, who led the study, called the results "striking in their magnitude."
Halpern and her colleague Stanly Coren, of the University of British Columbia, examined nearly a thousand death certificates from two southern California counties. They compared the manner of death with the individual's handedness, as reported by the deceased's family or friends.
They also broke the figures down by gender. Right-handed lived to an average of 78, six years longer than left-handed women. For men, the difference is even greater: right-handed men live to an average age of 73, compared to left-handed men's 62.
One reason for this sharp disparity may be that left-handed individuals, who make up only about 10 percent of the population, live in an world of right-handed gadgets and machines.
“Almost all engineering is geared to the right and right foot," Halpern said. "There are many more car and other accidents among left-handers because of their environment." Many indeed. According to the study, lefties are four times as likely to die an auto accident as righties. As for those "other" accidents? Lefties are six times as likely to die from them.
Halpern, herself right-handed, urges caution in interpreting the data however. The figures may look bleak, but she assures us, "There are many, many old left-handed people."
(A table or graph showing the life expectancy for right- and left-handed men, women and total populations would help illustrate the story.)
Lead/Focus: Right-handed people live nine years longer than left-handed people
Articles: According to a study in today's New England Journal of Medicine, right-handed people live an average of nine years longer than left-handed people. Professor Diane Halpern of California State University, who led the study, called the results "striking in their magnitude."
Halpern and her colleague Stanly Coren, of the University of British Columbia, examined nearly a thousand death certificates from two southern California counties. They compared the manner of death with the individual's handedness, as reported by the deceased's family or friends.
They also broke the figures down by gender. Right-handed lived to an average of 78, six years longer than left-handed women. For men, the difference is even greater: right-handed men live to an average age of 73, compared to left-handed men's 62.
One reason for this sharp disparity may be that left-handed individuals, who make up only about 10 percent of the population, live in an world of right-handed gadgets and machines.
“Almost all engineering is geared to the right and right foot," Halpern said. "There are many more car and other accidents among left-handers because of their environment." Many indeed. According to the study, lefties are four times as likely to die an auto accident as righties. As for those "other" accidents? Lefties are six times as likely to die from them.
Halpern, herself right-handed, urges caution in interpreting the data however. The figures may look bleak, but she assures us, "There are many, many old left-handed people."
(A table or graph showing the life expectancy for right- and left-handed men, women and total populations would help illustrate the story.)
Monday, September 15, 2008
So I think that I am allowed to blog here, too.
ROOMMATE BLOG POST!!!!!!!!
I do not consider myself a "blogger." In fact, I knee-jerk despise any compound verbal monstrosity beginning with the prefix "blog-." However, I would like to take this moment to tell every law professor who has ever written a journal article to check your own stupid citations.
Oh, law school. It is pretty much just a three-year hazing process where alcohol consumption goes from "a blast" to "a problem and maybe there's a group you should join." I try to study, but most of the time I end up pondering things like whether an intelligible principle would (re-)animate a delegation of emergency powers from the legislative branch to the executive branch for the purpose of combating the inevitable zombie apocalypse. If anyone knows the answer to this, please tell me, because it is really bugging me.
I do not consider myself a "blogger." In fact, I knee-jerk despise any compound verbal monstrosity beginning with the prefix "blog-." However, I would like to take this moment to tell every law professor who has ever written a journal article to check your own stupid citations.
Oh, law school. It is pretty much just a three-year hazing process where alcohol consumption goes from "a blast" to "a problem and maybe there's a group you should join." I try to study, but most of the time I end up pondering things like whether an intelligible principle would (re-)animate a delegation of emergency powers from the legislative branch to the executive branch for the purpose of combating the inevitable zombie apocalypse. If anyone knows the answer to this, please tell me, because it is really bugging me.
Saturday, September 13, 2008
Trust me, I'm a blogger
Blogs have the potential for great power. But, as Peter Parker's uncle taught us, with great power comes great responsibility. The freedom from an editor's influence or an institution's strictures can give a blogger the power to cover controversial topics with striking honestly. That same freedom, however, takes away a lot of the vetting, fact-checking and experience that is part of mainstream media.
Also, it's far too easy to get only the news I want with blogs. If I read my favorite pro-life blog everyday, it's pretty unlikely I'm going to get a broad picture of how abortion and women's rights are affecting America. The chances of reading news I don't like is much greater if I pick up The New York Times. And that's not a bad thing. Reading a conflicting opinion won't kill me.
Another weight on the balance is the accountability of a reporter. As a private citizen, I could write almost anything I wanted online and pass it off as fact. And if my blog post was quoted in a newspaper - bam! - instant credibility. But who am I? Who am I accountable to? What are my sources? I could be anyone with any agenda.
Tipping the scales further is the inherently amateur aspect of blogging. If trained reporters can have the wool pulled over their eyes, how much more so a citizen journalist? Would the average blogger know how to interview a source? Would she know what questions to ask or how to verify a lead? Maybe, but then again, maybe not. While professional reporters are far from infallible, there's a certain amount of trust entailed when a newspaper endorses a reporter's story enough to print it.
I think mainstream media has done the public a huge disservice in covering blogs so extensively. Networks have let themselves be led around by the nose in too many instances. If trained professionals are bowing to a small, vocal group of private citizens working from behind a screen name, then what good is a mainstream media at all? I can get all my news from a Republican blogging in Michigan or a Democrat in Oregon.
And that's the point: if I want an average person's opinion, I'll talk to my friends or classmates or people in my community. And that's about as far as I'll trust a blog, as someone's opinion. As soon as a blogger starts making claims and accusations, I'll turn to a reputable news source for more facts.
Blogs and other forums for public opinion are a great and necessary part of any democracy. They break up the homogeneous, national news and give a voice to under-represented citizens. They could even work to prod mainstream media into staying on the issues, in an ideal situation. Blogs, however, are just one component of the news, like community radio and other alternative media. There will always be a need and a place for mainstream media. I have a blog, but I sure as hell don't have the means, ability or credibility to report on conditions in Iraq or on the economic mood of Japan. Mainstream media do what private citizens can't and are held to a higher standard of accuracy. Blogs won't replace newspapers. (If they do, I'll just cash in my chips then and there.)
Also, it's far too easy to get only the news I want with blogs. If I read my favorite pro-life blog everyday, it's pretty unlikely I'm going to get a broad picture of how abortion and women's rights are affecting America. The chances of reading news I don't like is much greater if I pick up The New York Times. And that's not a bad thing. Reading a conflicting opinion won't kill me.
Another weight on the balance is the accountability of a reporter. As a private citizen, I could write almost anything I wanted online and pass it off as fact. And if my blog post was quoted in a newspaper - bam! - instant credibility. But who am I? Who am I accountable to? What are my sources? I could be anyone with any agenda.
Tipping the scales further is the inherently amateur aspect of blogging. If trained reporters can have the wool pulled over their eyes, how much more so a citizen journalist? Would the average blogger know how to interview a source? Would she know what questions to ask or how to verify a lead? Maybe, but then again, maybe not. While professional reporters are far from infallible, there's a certain amount of trust entailed when a newspaper endorses a reporter's story enough to print it.
I think mainstream media has done the public a huge disservice in covering blogs so extensively. Networks have let themselves be led around by the nose in too many instances. If trained professionals are bowing to a small, vocal group of private citizens working from behind a screen name, then what good is a mainstream media at all? I can get all my news from a Republican blogging in Michigan or a Democrat in Oregon.
And that's the point: if I want an average person's opinion, I'll talk to my friends or classmates or people in my community. And that's about as far as I'll trust a blog, as someone's opinion. As soon as a blogger starts making claims and accusations, I'll turn to a reputable news source for more facts.
Blogs and other forums for public opinion are a great and necessary part of any democracy. They break up the homogeneous, national news and give a voice to under-represented citizens. They could even work to prod mainstream media into staying on the issues, in an ideal situation. Blogs, however, are just one component of the news, like community radio and other alternative media. There will always be a need and a place for mainstream media. I have a blog, but I sure as hell don't have the means, ability or credibility to report on conditions in Iraq or on the economic mood of Japan. Mainstream media do what private citizens can't and are held to a higher standard of accuracy. Blogs won't replace newspapers. (If they do, I'll just cash in my chips then and there.)
Oh, Mr. Rather
In 2004, Dan Rather got a raw deal. By trusting his producer who her trusted her source, he basically got scape-goated in the "Memogate" scandal. He presented what later turned out to be questionable documents outlining President Bush's lackluster National Guard career. When angry viewers started writing out against the episode, events descended into a mud-slinging circus. The entire situation leaves me angry and very, very frustrated, not only at CBS but at the bloggers and the other media covering and creating the scandal.
As a new journalism student, CBS's sloppiness irritates the hell out of me. In rushing the story they damaged not only their own credibility but that of news media at large. Airing a story before they could collect and defend their facts only gave rabid bloggers fodder for their anti-media biases. Suddenly CBS had an "agenda" and were horrible partisans, if the blog were to be believed. Which brings me to the other group I'm disappointed in and angry at: the bloggers themselves.
A quote like that doesn't come from someone seriously concerned about the state of news and reporting in America. It comes from an irresponsible mob member who enjoys the smell of blood in the air. This sort of rabid chest-beating is part of a close-minded circle-jerk that leads nowhere. People looking for a conspiracy found it, as they always do. This sort of sensationalism is even more frustrating when you consider the potential of citizen reporters to cover issues the mainstream media can't or won't. Instead of a great forum of freedom, the internet more often resembles a soapbox for any one with an opinion and a set of lungs.
Mainstream media on both ends of the political spectrum have messed up, lied, been unclear and generally mucked up a lot of the political process. No one has a clean record. We can all admit that. Reporters and producers should get raked over the coals when they make such a schoolboy mistake as rushing a story. It's bad reporting. However we should also look at the real reasons those mistakes happen, not rush to point the partisan finger. Media is a business, and like any business it has customers. If they trip over themselves trying to please us, who's really to blame?
Both of us, of course. Us for holding them to a double standard (give us what we want, but don't pander to us), and them for compromising themselves in trying to live up to it.
The press may be free from the government, but as Memogate showed, it's still a bound servant to market forces and popular influence. It's asking a lot to demand the media be responsive to the people's needs but not swayed by mob mentality, but that's what we need. If accomplishing that were easy, we wouldn't need media professionals.
As a new journalism student, CBS's sloppiness irritates the hell out of me. In rushing the story they damaged not only their own credibility but that of news media at large. Airing a story before they could collect and defend their facts only gave rabid bloggers fodder for their anti-media biases. Suddenly CBS had an "agenda" and were horrible partisans, if the blog were to be believed. Which brings me to the other group I'm disappointed in and angry at: the bloggers themselves.
“NOTE to old media scum . . . . We are just getting warmed up!”
— “Rrrod,” on FreeRepublic.com
A quote like that doesn't come from someone seriously concerned about the state of news and reporting in America. It comes from an irresponsible mob member who enjoys the smell of blood in the air. This sort of rabid chest-beating is part of a close-minded circle-jerk that leads nowhere. People looking for a conspiracy found it, as they always do. This sort of sensationalism is even more frustrating when you consider the potential of citizen reporters to cover issues the mainstream media can't or won't. Instead of a great forum of freedom, the internet more often resembles a soapbox for any one with an opinion and a set of lungs.
Mainstream media on both ends of the political spectrum have messed up, lied, been unclear and generally mucked up a lot of the political process. No one has a clean record. We can all admit that. Reporters and producers should get raked over the coals when they make such a schoolboy mistake as rushing a story. It's bad reporting. However we should also look at the real reasons those mistakes happen, not rush to point the partisan finger. Media is a business, and like any business it has customers. If they trip over themselves trying to please us, who's really to blame?
Both of us, of course. Us for holding them to a double standard (give us what we want, but don't pander to us), and them for compromising themselves in trying to live up to it.
"Where the press is free, and every man able to read, all is safe." --Thomas Jefferson to Charles Yancey, 1816
The press may be free from the government, but as Memogate showed, it's still a bound servant to market forces and popular influence. It's asking a lot to demand the media be responsive to the people's needs but not swayed by mob mentality, but that's what we need. If accomplishing that were easy, we wouldn't need media professionals.
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Beat
I chose business for my beat.
One issue is the trend in environmental marketing, and labeling products "green" and "eco-friendly."
Story 1: What standards are used in advertising related to environmental claims? What companies/industries are promoting their products as eco-friendly? How legitimate are these claims and how do companies back them up?
Story 2: A company profile of organic food/health store detailing their market, their business policies and their history in Boulder.
Story 3: Compare the number and types of "green" businesses (organic food stores, hybrid car sales, etc) in Boulder to other areas of the nation.
Another issue to cover would be construction and housing development in Boulder.
Story 1: What is the housing market and new construction market doing recently, especially in light of the national housing crisis.
Story 2: How are builders incorporating "green" directives into new construction? How do the new laws and ordinances effect building?
Story 3: Report on public building/reconstruction around Boulder, such as schools, hospitals and other public facilities. How is the current economy affecting city/county construction? Who is winning the contracts? How much is it costing the city?
A third issue is employment in Boulder.
Story 1: Trend story on employment in Boulder, what changes have happened in the past decade, how Boulder compares to other cities in the U.S.
Story 2: Are fair employment practices being implemented in Boulder? Have there been or are there currently any conflicts over discrimination? For example the conflict between employees and owners at the Swift meatpacking plant in Greeley over religious observance.
A fourth issue is advertisement.
Story 1: How are local businesses advertising? Online, in print, canvassers? Which businesses or organizations are spending the most on advertisement? The least?
Story 2: Have there been any controversial ads run recently in Boulder? Who was affected and what were the different sides of the issues?
One issue is the trend in environmental marketing, and labeling products "green" and "eco-friendly."
Story 1: What standards are used in advertising related to environmental claims? What companies/industries are promoting their products as eco-friendly? How legitimate are these claims and how do companies back them up?
Story 2: A company profile of organic food/health store detailing their market, their business policies and their history in Boulder.
Story 3: Compare the number and types of "green" businesses (organic food stores, hybrid car sales, etc) in Boulder to other areas of the nation.
Another issue to cover would be construction and housing development in Boulder.
Story 1: What is the housing market and new construction market doing recently, especially in light of the national housing crisis.
Story 2: How are builders incorporating "green" directives into new construction? How do the new laws and ordinances effect building?
Story 3: Report on public building/reconstruction around Boulder, such as schools, hospitals and other public facilities. How is the current economy affecting city/county construction? Who is winning the contracts? How much is it costing the city?
A third issue is employment in Boulder.
Story 1: Trend story on employment in Boulder, what changes have happened in the past decade, how Boulder compares to other cities in the U.S.
Story 2: Are fair employment practices being implemented in Boulder? Have there been or are there currently any conflicts over discrimination? For example the conflict between employees and owners at the Swift meatpacking plant in Greeley over religious observance.
A fourth issue is advertisement.
Story 1: How are local businesses advertising? Online, in print, canvassers? Which businesses or organizations are spending the most on advertisement? The least?
Story 2: Have there been any controversial ads run recently in Boulder? Who was affected and what were the different sides of the issues?
Research Questions
1. Health care spending per capita increased an average of 10% annually from 1960 to 2003. Per person spending in 1960 was $126, and in 2003 it was $4,886. This information was obtained from the U.S. Census Bureau.
According to the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, however, spending in 2005 was $2,664 per "consumer unit." More research is needed to understand this discrepancy.
2. Americans spent $1.98 trillion on health care in 2005, according to U.S. Centers for Medicare and Medicaid. Americans spent 15% of the US GDP on health care in 2004. Switzerland, the next highest-spending country for which data was available, spent 11.6% of it's GPD on health care in that year. Data for Japan was not available for 2004, but in 2003 they spent 8% of their GDP on health care and enjoyed a greater life expectency for both males and females than the United States. Sources were the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development and U.S. National Center for Health Statistics
3. What are the five greatest health care threats to US?
I'm not sure how to tackle this question. Do you mean threats as causes of death? Factors or behaviors contributing to poor health? Or threats to receiving competent, affordable health care?
The five leading causes of death in 2005, according to the Center for Disease Control, were heart disease, cancer, stroke, chronic lower respiratory disease, and accidents (in order from greatest to least). To find out the underlying causes that increase the risk of these deaths, however, more research would be needed, either in contacting the CDC or doing more database research.
4. In 2004 the life expectancy at birth for a U.S. citizen was 77.8 years. Broken down by gender, it was 75.2 years for men and 80.4 for women. This is within the average of other developed nations, with Japan leading by over five years for females and three years for males. The lowest expectancy in the given data was Turkey, with women born in 2004 averaging 73.6 years and men 68.8 years. The sources for this information were the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development and U.S. National Center for Health Statistics.
5. At CU the cost of health care is $850 per semester. At West Virginia University annual coverage was $780, and at the University of Hawaii, annual coverage was $1,607. This information was collected directly from the universities' respective websites. I was unable to find a comparison of health plan costs for different colleges, but I could ask a librarian for help locating the information, or try to find government statistics available online or in the library.
According to the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, however, spending in 2005 was $2,664 per "consumer unit." More research is needed to understand this discrepancy.
2. Americans spent $1.98 trillion on health care in 2005, according to U.S. Centers for Medicare and Medicaid. Americans spent 15% of the US GDP on health care in 2004. Switzerland, the next highest-spending country for which data was available, spent 11.6% of it's GPD on health care in that year. Data for Japan was not available for 2004, but in 2003 they spent 8% of their GDP on health care and enjoyed a greater life expectency for both males and females than the United States. Sources were the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development and U.S. National Center for Health Statistics
3. What are the five greatest health care threats to US?
I'm not sure how to tackle this question. Do you mean threats as causes of death? Factors or behaviors contributing to poor health? Or threats to receiving competent, affordable health care?
The five leading causes of death in 2005, according to the Center for Disease Control, were heart disease, cancer, stroke, chronic lower respiratory disease, and accidents (in order from greatest to least). To find out the underlying causes that increase the risk of these deaths, however, more research would be needed, either in contacting the CDC or doing more database research.
4. In 2004 the life expectancy at birth for a U.S. citizen was 77.8 years. Broken down by gender, it was 75.2 years for men and 80.4 for women. This is within the average of other developed nations, with Japan leading by over five years for females and three years for males. The lowest expectancy in the given data was Turkey, with women born in 2004 averaging 73.6 years and men 68.8 years. The sources for this information were the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development and U.S. National Center for Health Statistics.
5. At CU the cost of health care is $850 per semester. At West Virginia University annual coverage was $780, and at the University of Hawaii, annual coverage was $1,607. This information was collected directly from the universities' respective websites. I was unable to find a comparison of health plan costs for different colleges, but I could ask a librarian for help locating the information, or try to find government statistics available online or in the library.
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